Zone One
By Colson Whitehead
Author: Colson Whitehead
Rating: ★★★
It’s now a trope that’s become near-universal as we’ve seen as geek culture move into the mainstream: “zombie stories aren’t about the supernatural; zombie stories are about humanity and how it works (or fails to work) when being confronted by the unbeatable, supernatural, and unstoppable.” I’ve stayed largely away from much of the nű-zombie media e.g. The Walking Dead, but when my friend Mike recommended this book I decided to take it for a spin. Based on the strength of this offering I was further inclined to read Whitehead’s other work, the widely acclaimed “The Underground Railroad.”
In the story, “Mark Spitz” is part of a team of “cleaners.” Amidst a resurgent humanity, cleaners are combing Manhattan block-by-block to make the island safe for the living again. To return it would be a symbol that the living had “made it.” As he walks around, Spitz reflects upon his survival after the Event, his loneliness, and his part in the decimated society that persists. There are scenes of biting undead and their disposal, as the genre demands, but the greatest part of the book is spent in Spitz’s headspace.
Incidentally, it merits mentioning, and the book certainly proceeds very subtly on this point, that our protagonist, Mark Spitz of Long Island, New York, is black. Whatever you think of who will survive an event like this, Whitehead asks you to ask what your relationship to race would be afterward (and why it matters).
Given this plot, Whitehead beautifully crafts a gentle, mournful elegiac tone. He maintains a Ray Bradbury-esque elegiac tone that re-lenses the nű-zombie story that proceeds steadily and deliberately, shuffling along like the undead.
On top of the remarkable tone and consistency, Whitehead shows beautiful craftsmanship with the English language.
Of Manhattan:
Millions of people tended to this magnificent contraption, they lived and sweated and toiled in it, serving the mechanism of metropolis and making it bigger, better, story by glorious story and idea by unlikely idea.
Of “the Event:”
Nature, if you have to call it something. Correcting an imbalance. It kicks us out of our robotic routine, what they called my dad before we pulled the plug: persistent vegetative state. Comeuppance for a flatlined culture.”
While some critics have complained of the pacing or the relative lack of “action” in the book, I found the book to be sad, beautiful, engaging, and fulfilling.
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"highlight": "reminisce about their time together in a bandit crew, ripping off weaker survivors for aspirin and thermal underwear and who knows what other bad acts. He effortlessly pictured their carefree promotion up the American Phoenix to stations of venal authority.",
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"highlight": "the elderly who thought themselves long past being surprised by the invidious schemes of the world,",
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"highlight": "“No, you’re right. Mustn’t humanize them. The whole thing breaks down unless you are fundamentally sure that they are not you.",
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"highlight": "Her assembled underclass who simultaneously undermined and justified her lifestyle choices. They needed to be terminated, and they tumbled into the dirty water beside Gary’s dead without differentiation.",
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"highlight": "When the wall fell, it fell quickly, as if it had been waiting for this moment, as if it had been created for the very instant of its failure. Barricades collapsed with haste once exposed for the riddled and rotten things they had always been. Beneath that façade of stability they were as ethereal as the society that created them. All the feverish subroutines of his survival programs booted up, for the first time in so long, and he located the flaw the instant before it expressed itself: there.",
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"highlight": "The city protected them, Mark Spitz thought. The typewriter-repair shop, the shoe-repair joint with its antiquated neon calligraphy and palpable incompetence that warned away the curious, the family deli with its germ-herding griddle: They stuck to the block with their faded signage and ninety-nine-year leases, murmuring among themselves in a dying vernacular of nostalgia. Businesses north and south, to either side of them, sold the new things, the chromium gizmos that people needed, while the city blocks nursed these old places, held them close like secrets or tumors.",
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"highlight": "Later Mark Spitz untangled the string of inevitabilities. It looked like a choker of dead black flies.",
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"highlight": "There was a single Us now, reviling a single Them. Would the old bigotries be reborn as well, when they cleared out this Zone, and the next, and so on, and they were packed together again, tight and suffocating on top of each other? Or was that particular bramble of animosities, fears, and envies impossible to recreate? If they could bring back paperwork, Mark Spitz thought, they could certainly reanimate prejudice, parking tickets, and reruns.",
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"highlight": "Listening to the gunfire from uptown, he knew what was happening. The barrier was about to fail. It was falling down, as it always did.",
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"highlight": "The damned bubbled and frothed on the most famous street in the world,",
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"highlight": "All the misery of the world channeled through this concrete canyon, the lament into which the human race was being transformed person by person. Every race, color, and creed was represented in this congregation that funneled down the avenue. As it had been before, per the myth of this melting-pot city. The city did not care for your story, the particular narrative of your reinvention; it took them all in, every immigrant in their strivings, regardless of bloodline, the identity of their homeland, the number of coins in their pocket. Nor did this plague discriminate; your blood fell instantly or your blood held out longer, but your blood always failed in the end.",
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"highlight": "The barrier was a dam now, suppressing the roiling torrent of the wasteland. It would not hold.",
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"highlight": "the brackets were as flimsy as plywood boards nailed into a window frame, in that elemental image of the barricade. That’s where every fortification splintered: where the nail pierced the wood, the rivet penetrated the concrete. The prayer met the truth. There is always a place for the dead to find purchase.",
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"highlight": "These were the angry dead, the ruthless chaos of existence made flesh. These were the ones who would resettle the broken city. No one else.",
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